Poetry Forum

(05-22-2014, 10:39 PM)chancemorris Wrote: [ -> ]Hi, I'm here to impress a grill

:3

welcome to the site
coke impresses grills. mine's addicted to the stuff

Hey everyone! I'm back and looking forward to catching up after being inactive for awhile. I'm wanting to jump back into this community and back into poetry. And I'm Ash for those who have since joined while I was neglecting the Pig Pen. I can't wait to rip everyone's poetry apart.

Hey there Ash, nice to see you back! We've missed you

(05-23-2014, 12:55 PM)arbil_poieo Wrote: [ -> ]Hey everyone! I'm back and looking forward to catching up after being inactive for awhile. I'm wanting to jump back into this community and back into poetry. And I'm Ash for those who have since joined while I was neglecting the Pig Pen. I can't wait to rip everyone's poetry apart.

have at it you ragamuffin and welcome back

(05-23-2014, 12:55 PM)arbil_poieo Wrote: [ -> ]Hey everyone! I'm back and looking forward to catching up after being inactive for awhile. I'm wanting to jump back into this community and back into poetry. And I'm Ash for those who have since joined while I was neglecting the Pig Pen. I can't wait to rip everyone's poetry apart.

Welcome back, Ash, nice to meet you.

Hey everyone, nice to meet you all! I'm Bridget. I moderate another writing forum but figured it would be nice to branch out, get some new perspectives on my work, and not have to yell at people for posting lame critiques for a change ... I like how people seem to care about giving and getting good feedback. I'm looking forward to meeting and talking poetry with new people!

Hi Bridget, welcome to the madhouse! We can't kill people for posting lame critiques, but we certainly can ridicule them

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PS. Loving your work so far.

Nice job on the critiques, Bridget. Welcome, come have some fun.

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Hello every one, i'm qdeathstar.


Im from Virginia beach, va, united states, 28m. So that covers asl... Hmmm, well, wanna cyb0r?

Welcome, q, hope you enjoy the site.

i just read you feedback to the [we] poem and must say...thank you for understanding how a workshop works. while some of us aren't too polished in critique we try to do the best we can. leanne is our assassin and milo the hanging judge we use is adept enough with the trapdoor handle.

welcome to the site.

(05-24-2014, 02:35 PM)Isis Wrote: [ -> ]Hey everyone, nice to meet you all! I'm Bridget. I moderate another writing forum but figured it would be nice to branch out, get some new perspectives on my work, and not have to yell at people for posting lame critiques for a change ... I like how people seem to care about giving and getting good feedback. I'm looking forward to meeting and talking poetry with new people!

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i just read you feedback to the [we] poem and must say...thank you for understanding how a workshop works. while some of us aren't too polished in critique we try to do the best we can. leanne is our assassin and milo the hanging judge we use is adept enough with the trapdoor handle.

welcome to the site bridget.

(05-24-2014, 02:35 PM)Isis Wrote: [ -> ]Hey everyone, nice to meet you all! I'm Bridget. I moderate another writing forum but figured it would be nice to branch out, get some new perspectives on my work, and not have to yell at people for posting lame critiques for a change ... I like how people seem to care about giving and getting good feedback. I'm looking forward to meeting and talking poetry with new people!

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hi qdeathstar, i'm billy and i cyber but first you have to do 5 pieces of reasonable feedback

(05-24-2014, 09:28 PM)Qdeathstar Wrote: [ -> ]^^^^^^
Hello every one, i'm qdeathstar.


Im from Virginia beach, va, united states, 28m. So that covers asl... Hmmm, well, wanna cyb0r?

I think I've done 4-5 thus far. But I'm not sure what reasonable is.

(05-25-2014, 10:33 AM)Qdeathstar Wrote: [ -> ]I think I've done 4-5 thus far. But I'm not sure what reasonable is.

i was having a laugh re your cyber comment is all

cheers

(05-27-2014, 03:14 AM)world1sapartfromreality Wrote: [ -> ]I see that this is the place where we introduce ourselves.

As you can see, I am world1sapartfromreality, and I came here to share some poetry and possibly meet some other poets on this forum. I cannot wait to see what this forum has in store.

Hello.

The store is currently down but if you send me $20 I will send you a T-shirt and a coffee mug.

What do i get for $50?

(05-27-2014, 05:13 AM)Qdeathstar Wrote: [ -> ]What do i get for $50?

A signed picture of me eating a steak.

Just wanted to shout out to all the newbies who are giving us such excellent critiques -- you don't need to be an expert to have an opinion, you just need to read it and let the writer know specifically how it affected you. Make suggestions as you like; they should always be received gracefully, even if the writer doesn't agree with you.

So, thank you to everyone who's working so beautifully to make this site a great place to be.

(05-27-2014, 06:43 AM)milo Wrote: [ -> ]

(05-27-2014, 05:13 AM)Qdeathstar Wrote: [ -> ]What do i get for $50?

A signed picture of me eating a steak.

Sounds... arousing.

I thought so too, at first, but the pictures just kept coming...