Another Moment
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(02-16-2024, 03:56 PM)Wjames Wrote:  Lungs extend your body
hanging from a bar in the park
coloured hopscotch and birthday.

The chocolate cake on your tongue
is cool, freshly mown grass …. Love these two lines
in a slow breath.

The shoulder tweak and waning grip
place your feet on chipped wood. …. I like the detail of chipped wood 

Opening your eyes, your son's
playing tag in the field. …an unexpected and delightful merging of childhood dreaming with the present 
Lovely work
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Another Moment - by Wjames - 02-16-2024, 03:56 PM
RE: Another Moment - by dukealien - 02-16-2024, 11:06 PM
RE: Another Moment - by busker - 02-17-2024, 11:12 PM
RE: Another Moment - by rowens - 02-19-2024, 10:45 PM
RE: Another Moment - by Wjames - 02-22-2024, 12:17 PM



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