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Albuquerque skies
blue as our baby boy's eyes--
we could settle here
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Your haiku are not awkward, they're tangible statements. They're formed well so that something new is said in each line without an awkward flow. A lot of people write incomplete sentences just to fit the format, which I've never liked. I think you have a good grasp on haiku.
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(12-13-2023, 03:38 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: Albuquerque skies
blue as our baby boy's eyes--
we could settle here
Very pleasant. And then I thought, undocumented headed north? Curse you, current events!
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