Another Moment

[dukealien]

Lungs extend your body
hanging from a bar in the park
coloured hopscotch and birthday.

The chocolate cake on your tongue
is cool, freshly mown grass
in a slow breath.

The shoulder tweak and waning grip
place your feet on chipped wood.

Opening your eyes, your son's
playing tag in the field.

This is delightful.  Thrown off a little by "tweak," know the feeling and it works by sight and sound, but then the dictionary kicks in and I'm momentarily confused.  It's a pinch, an incipient charley-horse,  probably rotator-cuff... can't think of a better word.  "Strain," but that lacks impact.  Good job.