05-26-2017, 05:11 AM
Succulents crest
in nova bloom
blest God's way
Yemenese flowers
bloom in the sand -
God loves US bombs
in nova bloom
blest God's way
Yemenese flowers
bloom in the sand -
God loves US bombs
Fauxku Choo Choo (the play's the thing)
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05-26-2017, 05:11 AM
Succulents crest
in nova bloom blest God's way Yemenese flowers bloom in the sand - God loves US bombs
05-26-2017, 05:45 AM
Yemenese flowers
bloom in the sand - God loves US bombs Yemen's cure: Footprints in the Sand.
there's always a better reason to love
05-26-2017, 06:54 AM
Yemen's cure:
Footprints in the Sand. US is cleaning up Yemen, sand, footprints, and all. God approves women and children first.
05-26-2017, 01:27 PM
US is cleaning up Yemen,
sand, footprints, and all. God approves women and children first. my footprints smaller now - summer sand
i used to know a lotta stuff, but i still have eight cats
05-26-2017, 01:55 PM
Footprints smaller now -
summer sand Falling rain Wipe this slate clean Edit: Assuming it was the length and not the theme.
The Chronicles of Lethargia
05-26-2017, 03:06 PM
(05-26-2017, 01:55 PM)Radetof.Yahska Wrote: My footprints Good poem... though I must note it doesn't follow this thread's guidelines. Fauxku Choo Choo guidelines:
i used to know a lotta stuff, but i still have eight cats
05-26-2017, 03:18 PM
Good poem...though I must note
it doesn't follow this thread's guidelines. Don't mind Ray ~ he doesn't follow any thread's guidelines.
05-26-2017, 03:41 PM
Don't mind Ray ~
he doesn't follow any thread's guidelines. Follow Ray's guidelines, pigs! Especially the one legitimizing public self-diddling.
05-26-2017, 03:50 PM
(05-26-2017, 03:28 PM)rayheinrich Wrote:(05-26-2017, 03:18 PM)Lizzie Wrote: Good poem...though I must note Length not a problem Grasshopper Piddling on the porch Little wee-wee O joyful ignorance
The Chronicles of Lethargia
05-26-2017, 04:01 PM
(05-26-2017, 03:50 PM)Radetof.Yahska Wrote: Length not a problem Making progress... you've got guideline #2 down, but you've ignored guideline #1: 1. Any TINY poem of 1 to 4 lines (or a 5 line limerick) - does not have to be haiku-like. Gods these days... nobody pays them any attention.
i used to know a lotta stuff, but i still have eight cats
05-26-2017, 04:06 PM
(05-26-2017, 04:01 PM)rayheinrich Wrote:(05-26-2017, 03:50 PM)Radetof.Yahska Wrote: Length not a problem 5 line limerick Distracted hoi polloi Dead gods Dime a dozen
The Chronicles of Lethargia
05-26-2017, 04:20 PM
(05-26-2017, 04:06 PM)Radetof.Yahska Wrote: ... That wasn't a limerick, grasshopper.
i used to know a lotta stuff, but i still have eight cats
05-26-2017, 04:28 PM
My footprints
smaller now - summer sand it must be summer - there are footprints and sand in my sandwich
05-26-2017, 07:47 PM
it must be summer -
there are footprints and sand in my sandwich summer streams babble drowning out choo choo fauxku sand-rake
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05-27-2017, 02:34 AM
summer streams babble
drowning out choo choo fauxku sand-rake sand-raking my zen garden - litter box
i used to know a lotta stuff, but i still have eight cats
05-27-2017, 05:21 AM
sand-raking
my zen garden - litter box sand spread on ice - zen and the art of shadow-boxing
05-27-2017, 10:37 AM
sand spread on ice -
zen and the art of shadow-boxing ice? shadow? vaporize in the heat of our white-hot love
i used to know a lotta stuff, but i still have eight cats
05-27-2017, 10:50 AM
ice? shadow?
vaporize in the heat of our white-hot love white-hot ice ~ shadowed love vaporized
05-27-2017, 10:57 AM
white-hot ice ~
shadowed love vaporized love shadowed stalking my heart
i used to know a lotta stuff, but i still have eight cats
05-27-2017, 11:43 AM
love
shadowed stalking my heart shadows at the heart of love ~ dead stalks |
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