using other forms besides iambic pentameter.

[billy]

i think ray was on about me
being the dark force you see
with a well sharpened axe
i'll chop to the max
if the topic's not kept to a tee

brownlie's like a blister or boil
he speaks; we stand back or recoil
with wiki he's tricki
and can be quite picky
though he does make an excellent foil

[milo]

running our of time? maybe

That's a plight of gargantuan size
and you know I, of course, sympathise
When composing these jests
I researched anapests
then ran short by 3 feet for reprise

[Leanne]

With meter you needn't be glum
I find that a good rule of thumb
is that any old triple
goes well with a tipple
of rum da de dum da de dum

[milo]

So we're having discussions of meter?
But Leanne's here and no one can beat her.
Well won't I look smart
when we speak of this art:
I'll just wait for 2 weeks then repeat her.

[rayheinrich]

... ever rusting in the chains of mine own irony.


A shy, deferential torpedo,
Fell in love with a pregnant mosquito.
For the sake of their rhyme, they went back in time,*
And emerged as a blood-filled burrito.


*In homage to my feline friends, I concatenate the
two dimeter lines of limericks to make a line with four feet.

[milo]

... ever rusting in the chains of mine own irony.


A shy, deferential torpedo,
Fell in love with a pregnant mosquito.
For the sake of their rhyme, they went back in time,*
And emerged as a blood-filled burrito.


*In homage to my feline friends, I concatenate the
two dimeter lines of limericks to make a line with four feet.

While reading your rhyming oblation
I came to the realization
the rhythm was fine, though
your missing a line. Oh!
it's because of the concatenation.

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i think ray was on about me
being the dark force you see
with a well sharpened axe
i'll chop to the max
if the topic's not kept to a tee

brownlie's like a blister or boil
he speaks; we stand back or recoil
with wiki he's tricki
and can be quite picky
though he does make an excellent foil

yah, billy's a regular nazi
if you look for my post but cannot see
the things that I wrote
well, I'd like to denote
if you think, he'll post edit your thoughts, see.

[Brownlie]

There once was a clown from the land
Of burgers who sold as a brand
Cheese burgers and fries
That lads would all buy
Then, bellies would grow and expand

The clown was a sly sort of fiend
He lured the children with dreams
And whisked them away
and then made them pay
by stopping their hearts with his greed.

I must have been high.

[billy]

to milo
OMG!

you're the 2nd to call me a nazi
dressed up in a trench coat i'm snazzy
but you twats all think
that Herr Fuhrer stinks
and the bastard will never be jazzy

[milo]

to milo
OMG!

you're the 2nd to call me a nazi
dressed up in a trench coat i'm snazzy
but you twats all think
that Herr Fuhrer stinks
and the bastard will never be jazzy

The PigPen daddy is you
and not just your gobbledygoo
not your smite or your hook
or your meinkempf look
but your love for the rack and the screw!

(for Sylvia Plath)

[Brownlie]

There was a Young Lady whose chin,
Resembled the point of a pin;
So she had it made sharp,
And purchased a harp,
And played several tunes with her chin.

-By: Edward Lear

[milo]

There was a Young Lady whose chin,
Resembled the point of a pin;
So she had it made sharp,
And purchased a harp,
And played several tunes with her chin.

-By: Edward Lear

Oh, Brownlie you're raising the bar
quoting Lear brings out the bizarre.
Eat your quince on the moon
with your runcible spoon
what a beautiful pussy you are!