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Found Poetry
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07-11-2011, 08:48 AM
Wow, that's an interesting exercise, and it works so beautifully! There's a great liquid vibe to the words, with the sentences shifting midway into other sentences giving a succulent, dreamy effect. I really enjoyed reading it.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Found Poetry - by Aish - 07-10-2011, 02:51 AM
RE: Found Poetry - by billy - 07-10-2011, 11:49 AM
RE: Found Poetry - by Aish - 07-10-2011, 01:22 PM
RE: Found Poetry - by billy - 07-10-2011, 02:59 PM
RE: Found Poetry - by Aish - 07-10-2011, 04:14 PM
RE: Found Poetry - by billy - 07-10-2011, 05:31 PM
RE: Found Poetry - by addy - 07-11-2011, 08:48 AM
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