05-31-2011, 11:01 AM
(05-30-2011, 04:35 PM)jadielue Wrote: WiltOne of your best poems jadielue. A great take on the ideas / feelings that come when writing. Great stuff
When I write I very rarely
feel something, something
attached to the words,
something with teeth that
grazes my skin just barely,
leaving only a note of a
place or a time. this is a lovely way of putting it. This verse is pretty much perfect
Braids
Trailing along in pretty
ribbons. Sometimes they
take me, the rest just
seem to be. This one is a bit more vague, but I think I get the sense of whimsy in it
Incision
But a few, a few touch me
there. Nicely doneThe others are just one-
night-stands and I honestly
couldn't tell you their names.

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
