From the Writing Desk:
#4
(05-30-2011, 04:35 PM)jadielue Wrote:  Wilt

When I write I very rarely
feel something, something
attached to the words,
something with teeth that
grazes my skin just barely,
leaving only a note of a
place or a time. this is a lovely way of putting it. This verse is pretty much perfect

Braids

Trailing along in pretty
ribbons. Sometimes they
take me, the rest just
seem to be. This one is a bit more vague, but I think I get the sense of whimsy in it

Incision

But a few, a few touch me
there. Nicely doneThe others are just one-
night-stands and I honestly
couldn't tell you their names.
One of your best poems jadielue. A great take on the ideas / feelings that come when writing. Great stuff Smile
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
Reply


Messages In This Thread
From the Writing Desk: - by jadielue - 05-30-2011, 04:35 PM
RE: From the Writing Desk: - by billy - 05-31-2011, 09:15 AM
RE: From the Writing Desk: - by jadielue - 05-31-2011, 09:46 AM
RE: From the Writing Desk: - by addy - 05-31-2011, 11:01 AM
RE: From the Writing Desk: - by jadielue - 05-31-2011, 05:52 PM



Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)
Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!