Aging
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(05-11-2013, 06:26 AM)Volaticus Wrote:  
Crooked, lumpy limbs
on eventide canvas;
The silhouetted Beech
Another good one Volaticus, especially the last line which I most definitely wasn't expecting. A tree? not a person, I had to do a double take just to make sure, very good. And 'silhouette' is another one of those words like 'turquoise' that not only looks beautiful but is beautiful to say. You are becoming quite proficient with these very quickly, I'm impressed.
Excellent.
feedback award wae aye man ye radgie
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Aging - by Volaticus - 05-11-2013, 06:26 AM
RE: Aging - by Magpie - 05-11-2013, 09:30 AM
RE: Aging - by Heartafire - 05-11-2013, 09:36 AM
RE: Aging - by Volaticus - 05-11-2013, 09:45 AM



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