01-04-2013, 03:51 AM
Tectak, Todd, Brandon:
I thank you all for reading and commenting.
I am aware of the punctuation issues. I have drafted this with the breaks and groupings of punctuation, but it wasn't completely or correctly resolved, so i abandoned it all together...just laziness, and it appears i can't sneak it through. Again, i thank you for the notes, i will clean this up when i got more time.
Oh Todd, as soon as you mentioned it, i agree that the lower case "i's" do dangle out there awkward and self aware...I'll be sure to clean that up as well
I thank you all for reading and commenting.
I am aware of the punctuation issues. I have drafted this with the breaks and groupings of punctuation, but it wasn't completely or correctly resolved, so i abandoned it all together...just laziness, and it appears i can't sneak it through. Again, i thank you for the notes, i will clean this up when i got more time.
Oh Todd, as soon as you mentioned it, i agree that the lower case "i's" do dangle out there awkward and self aware...I'll be sure to clean that up as well