12-26-2012, 10:21 PM
Hi. Wow, thanks for the replies. I thought this thread was history; I was just coming back to delete it.
I think I have the same answer for a comment both of you made--not the same comment I think, but I have a feeling the cause for the comments is the same.
The question of "intermingle/explode" and "you and I" after intermingle.
"You and I" are the subject of "intermingle," so they are necessary. I think that answer might also satisfy the issue Rowens brought up with "explode," but I wasn't sure if I saw what he was referring to.
I had taken a 2nd look at that "intermingle" there before when I originally wrote it, but I have since realized that it is not an infinitive, but the 1st person plural form of the verb with "you and I" being the subject.
Tragically, the relationship I wrote it about didn't have a lot going for it...
I think I have the same answer for a comment both of you made--not the same comment I think, but I have a feeling the cause for the comments is the same.
The question of "intermingle/explode" and "you and I" after intermingle.
"You and I" are the subject of "intermingle," so they are necessary. I think that answer might also satisfy the issue Rowens brought up with "explode," but I wasn't sure if I saw what he was referring to.
I had taken a 2nd look at that "intermingle" there before when I originally wrote it, but I have since realized that it is not an infinitive, but the 1st person plural form of the verb with "you and I" being the subject.
Quote:This is a sweet love poem that has a lot going for itThanks.
Tragically, the relationship I wrote it about didn't have a lot going for it...