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I've been alone so long
I dont know what today is any more
than I know what today is for any more
than I know to tell lady from whore.
l have a poem in mind
to match my despair, only this
and nothing more.
For I don't know Cupid
as much as I know cupidity;
for this I binge in cannabitic stupor
as I hang out with words
and a no-longer blank piece of paper.
But this is day-to-day,
what makes today different
I don't know.
Actually, I do.
It's looking outside
to see the view change
while my viewpoint remains
static; not didactic, not a tactic
to take but masturbation
through escape, but it's late.
Happy fuckin Valentine's Day.
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Taking all of that into consideration, that would follow.
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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in a few hours it will be February 15 and we can go back to counting the days til spring.
billy wrote:welcome to the site. make it your own, wear it like a well loved slipper and wear it out. ella pleads:please click forum titles for posting guidelines, important threads. New poet? Try Poetic DevicesandWard's Tips
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Ella always the optimistic, thanks for the reminder, I needed it
Dale yup
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I don't see why the speaker seems to have a remorseful view-- or a disdain of masturbation, personally I'm a fan...
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Oh believe me the speaker is too, jus not on a day where everyone fuckin
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Don't worry I have some amusing anagrams to cheer you up and take your mind off such matters.
Life Sucks --- I f*ck less!

Ermm hang on, I'll try again...
The traveling salesman --- Vaginas: enters them all!

Ermm, bare with me... I'll get this right...
Feeling romantic --- Flaming erection!

Dam... this has went so wrong... One more try...
Desperation --- A rope ends it.
Oooopss!!!
wae aye man ye radgie
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Impressive!
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billy wrote:welcome to the site. make it your own, wear it like a well loved slipper and wear it out. ella pleads:please click forum titles for posting guidelines, important threads. New poet? Try Poetic DevicesandWard's Tips
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(02-15-2016, 01:15 PM)Weeded Wrote: Oh believe me the speaker is too, jus not on a day where everyone fuckin 
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