memories

[casey]

Carefree laughter
and meaninglessness cries
pink lips
And innocent eyes

full of Imagination
Dreams too wide
Ending in fairytales
With a peaceful smile

When Dad was my world
And mummy its guide
Sis was an idol
And nothing to hide

muddy hands and bare foot
runing around , were the days
When the little heart blieved,
Everythng would fall into Its place !

[rowens]

Most will tell you that there isn't much going on here, and that the errors make it worse.

But it captures those memories, so if that's all you want to do, that's fine.

[AlexSharp]

Good imagery, I'd just spell check before posting.

[casey]

What errors?

[rowens]

Maybe they're not errors. You never know these days.
Carefree laughter
and meaninglessness cries
pink lips
And innocent eyes

full of Imagination
Dreams too wide
Ending in fairytales
With a peaceful smile

When Dad was my world
And mummy its guide
Sis was an idol
And nothing to hide

muddy hands and bare foot
runing around , were the days
here


When the little heart blieved,
here

Everythng would fall into Its place !
here

Then the spaces between marks. Though they look like you meant to do that.