Only I know

[halcro]

I love you, she emphasises,
and I smile,
My heart is yours,
When she comes before me,
Without doubt, and embraces me,
I disappear in her sweet endearing scent,
That only I know of.

[Todd]

Hello, two quick points: 1) You have to do critiques in the serious forum before posting there. 2) This poem has too many grammar errors to even be considered for that forum. /admin