"The freedom is as long as an instant."
#1
I am a dark flame
That dances in a cloud
Of thoughts of a crazy god.
It's my cage. I'll break it.
Furious light and a deafening
Thunderclap would welcome me.
I am forever free in this dazzling
Instant!


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#2
Just a spelling mistake ("break" instead of "brake") but I like this... its chaotic energy, and its metaphysical contradictions.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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#3
very well done RY
it's all over the place
crazy and unrestrained.
defiant and decadently delightful

thanks
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#4
Addy, Billy - thank you so much!
Yep! Yes, Addy, I did mistake ... sorry! Of course it must be "break".
R.Y
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