windy poems

[Miley]

how 
wind surrenders 
w/o loss


continuously   laughter
pressed around
all blades of grass

[dukealien]

how 
wind surrenders 
w/o loss


continuously   laughter
pressed around
all blades of grass

Intriguing.  Whether, for example, to treat the white space as a colon (following answers the implied question) or em dash (following continues the description).  The small white space (double space) after "continuously"  also suggests a missing or implied mark of punctuation.

But the whole point of wind is that it presses *unequally* on different surfaces of each individual blade of grass, though more or less similarly on all blades.  Otherwise it would just be pressure:  wind is diversity, inequality.

That's static, at a given time.  Wind, like sound of voices, varies over time in waves.  Or, of course, laughter.

So, worth thinking about:  much in little.  Short form success.