Pneumatic
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Pneumatic


“Whipped topping,” as they call it,
is remarkably cheap.
No wonder: it is merely
the self-same air you breathe
tastefully packaged.

Rather like the Playmate’s silicon
which, in elemental form,
can be found on any sandy beach.
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(10-06-2022, 09:53 AM)dukealien Wrote:  Pneumatic


“Whipped topping,” as they call it,
is remarkably cheap.
No wonder: it is merely
the self-same air you breathe
tastefully packaged.

Rather like the Playmate’s silicon
which, in elemental form,
can be found on any sandy beach.

Very much enjoy this each time I read it.  Perhaps you could do without "as they call it".  The almost rhymes cheap/breathe/beach is very catchy.
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