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I eat,
Neither bitter nor sweet,
Boiled tongue
With green peas.
And gloomy ponder:
Or
Mr. Socrates was deeply
Wrong.
Or,
As usual, not enough
Vodka.
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i'm not sure what i like but i do like it.
can you give us some background to it
thanks for the read.
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Hi, Billy!
Thanks for reading and comment!
Yep! I "play" here on an ancient Greece parable about philosopher Socrates. He was a slave and his master sent him to buy "very sweet and very bitter" meal. Socrates bought a tongue.
Why "vodka"? Probably because it's a great peacemaker for human being? Ha-ha! Or probably not?
Best regards, R.Y.
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i like it even more now, thanks ris.
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Oh dear lord, I LOVE this one

... especially with that practical yet befuddled ending. Fantastic subject, pitch-perfect execution.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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