All My Fears About Us
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All My Fears About Us


Is it too early?
Or is it too late?


Is there even a chance?
Or did I already miss the date?


Do you deserve to know?
Or do you just need your space?


Do I owe it to myself?
Or is what we have enough?


Does this damage what we have?
Or do I owe you more trust?


Do I even know the feeling?
Or is this just lust?

My gut is telling me this is too short, but I don't really know.
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Hello,
I enjoyed the structure and style of this poem, it seems to capture racing, doubtful thoughts. I also liked the rhyming, I'm partial to rhyming haha.
If you want to follow the gut feeling that it's too short, I do think some of the lines could be developed a little more so that they are less vague. Instead of saying "Does this..." you could say "Does ____ " with more description. Also, you could add one non-question line after each stanza of questions. Just some suggestions! Thanks for sharing your writing.
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