Trademarked

[billy]

The little rhino beetle
had little rhino horns
That didn’t save it
from the eight-and-a-half Nike

[srijantje]

i would put,that didn't save it

[heslopian]

Eight and a half what Nike? Other than that I liked this. A lot of your shorter poems have a gentle cynicism which I quite enjoy.

[addy]

I both love and hate your poems at the same time

[billy]

sj; thanks i did as you suggested.

heslopian; a piece of footwear, where i come from a nike is a trainer.

thanks for hating my stuf addy hehe.

thanks for the feedback all.

[srijantje]

that one has more depth than i realized the first time i read it

[billy]

thanks sj