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Isolation (A Cinquain)
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01-17-2011, 11:55 AM
Isolation
Endless concealment Drifting in space, slowly suffocating Painful and protracted and yet comforting Stillness
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
01-17-2011, 04:42 PM
01-17-2011, 06:08 PM
Thanks for the heads up on the spelling mistake!
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
01-18-2011, 01:40 PM
Ugh, I've had this mood a few times
 . I loved the build up and drop at the end of this, just expresses this perfectly
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
01-18-2011, 10:29 PM
Thank you for your kindness Addy
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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