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To clamber inside a warm orifice,
feel the beauty of penetration,
as you watch through the window
the night dust's ballet; this is
the only contentment I seek.
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a cheeky little piece lol.
not sure clamber inside. it sounds like all of you is getting in there. which i suppose you could metaphorically speaking.
thanks for the read as always.
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(01-13-2011, 06:04 AM)billy Wrote: a cheeky little piece lol.
not sure clamber inside. it sounds like all of you is getting in there. which i suppose you could metaphorically speaking.
thanks for the read as always.
Admittedly when I wrote that first line a scene from
South Park recurred in my mind, where Paris Hilton finds herself lodged fully inside a man's anus

Not sure how I would change that though. I'll give it some thought.
Cheeky? I thought I was being all deep and profound

Thanks for the kind words and feedback, Billy
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Five lines written with clever grace!
Enjoyed.
R.Y.
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Thank you for your kind words Ris Yerg
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