Happiness
#1
To clamber inside a warm orifice,
feel the beauty of penetration,
as you watch through the window
the night dust's ballet; this is
the only contentment I seek.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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#2
a cheeky little piece lol.
not sure clamber inside. it sounds like all of you is getting in there. which i suppose you could metaphorically speaking.
thanks for the read as always.
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#3
(01-13-2011, 06:04 AM)billy Wrote:  a cheeky little piece lol.
not sure clamber inside. it sounds like all of you is getting in there. which i suppose you could metaphorically speaking.
thanks for the read as always.

Admittedly when I wrote that first line a scene from South Park recurred in my mind, where Paris Hilton finds herself lodged fully inside a man's anusBig Grin Not sure how I would change that though. I'll give it some thought.
Cheeky? I thought I was being all deep and profoundHysterical
Thanks for the kind words and feedback, BillySmile
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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#4
Five lines written with clever grace!
Enjoyed.
R.Y.
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#5
Thank you for your kind words Ris YergSmile
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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