Everything in Moderation
#1
Forgive me Mods
for I know what I've done,
2 in Misc and 2 in fun.
Ignoring all others for the sake of my pen
Poets forgive me it's happened again.
I solemnly promise to pay for my sin
This whole weekend will be feedback and Gin.

So please put down that big ban hammer
that shit goes down as fast as Franz Klammer (sorry)
I here by vow to my poets, my friends
To read them once then read them again,
To sound out the trumpets let the banners unfurl
and point out the bad bits that make my toes curl.

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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#2
(09-07-2017, 05:26 AM)Keith Wrote:  Forgive me Mods
for I know what I've done,
2 in Misc and 2 in fun.
Ignoring all others for the sake of my pen
Poets forgive me it's happened again.
I solemnly promise to pay for my sin
This whole weekend will be feedback and Gin.

So please put down that big ban hammer
that shit goes down as fast as Frans Clammer (sorry)
I here by vow to my poets, my friends
To read them once then read them again,
To sound out the trumpets let the banners unfurl
and point out the bad bits that make my toes curl.

Hysterical Dodgy
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#3
(09-07-2017, 05:26 AM)Keith Wrote:  Forgive me Mods
for I know what I've done,
2 in Misc and 2 in fun.
Ignoring all others for the sake of my pen I think this is exactly would you should do. If you're in a place to write, then write. Crit has it's own place and needs inspiring too. I'd hate to miss one of your poems because you thought you were slacking on crits. All wonderful reading. 
Poets forgive me it's happened again.
I solemnly promise to pay for my sin
This whole weekend will be feedback and Gin.

So please put down that big ban hammer
that shit goes down as fast as Frans Clammer (sorry)
I here by vow to my poets, my friends
To read them once then read them again,
To sound out the trumpets let the banners unfurl
and point out the bad bits that make my toes curl.
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#4
Twat Big Grin
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