A Reading & Animation - The Tyger

[jayjayaustralia]

OK... my first post. Hope I am doing this right and its ok, and posting in the right forum. I don't actually write poetry anymore, but I have started to  work with my 17 year old son where I voice and he animates it...

The following was our first attempt..... William Blake's 'The Tyger'

Would be happy for any advice on how to improve the reading or the animation...and if everything fit well or should be adjusted
www.youtube.com/watch?v=AUqowAVgZxA

[Achebe]

Hi jayjay - this will be moved to the Miscellaneous forum soon, but perhaps you should consider that there's a second layer of meaning in the poem i.e. Tyger = Satan. Stars = rebelling angels etc
The animation needs to allude to all that. I'll leave the creative figuring out to you.

[jayjayaustralia]

Hi jayjay - this will be moved to the Miscellaneous forum soon, but perhaps you should consider that there's a second layer of meaning in the poem i.e. Tyger = Satan. Stars = rebelling angels etc
The animation needs to allude to all that. I'll leave the creative figuring out to you.

hmm never thought of the Tyger as satan