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Tiger the Lion Offline
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#1
09-29-2014, 09:07 AM
sun set
slightly sooner
this evening
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Tamara Offline
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#2
09-29-2014, 11:25 AM
a moment well captured. and sun set is more effective than sunset here. it gives more emphasis to the scene.
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rayheinrich Offline
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#3
09-29-2014, 12:50 PM
(09-29-2014, 09:07 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  sun set
slightly sooner
this evening

Beautiful!
The very heart of haiku; Issa would be amused.
(And a kigo most creative.)

where is this?
here
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billy Offline
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#4
09-29-2014, 06:14 PM
bloody lovely

(09-29-2014, 09:07 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  sun set
slightly sooner
this evening
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