a point arose about this is not poetry
(04-28-2014, 09:01 AM)billy Wrote:  shem is a tomato

damn you [waves fist]
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(04-28-2014, 04:50 AM)Leanne Wrote:  shem, I adore you, but you are not getting chewing gum for dinner ever again -- it plays havoc with your bowels and the place is uninhabitable for days.

What makes a glass of water on a shelf into an oak tree? Context. I don't understand how this fundamental concept can have escaped entire generations -- probably thanks to the education system's relentless modernity and boxes and labels and standardised bigotry.

Taken in a vacuum, virtually nothing is anything but its most obvious elements. A painting is colours on canvas; dinner sustains our physical being; a dog whistle is a shiny silver object; and a poem is a selection of words on a page.

Context allows me to draw upon prior knowledge and understanding to recognise that Paul Klee's Flower Myth is not just variations of red to go with the decor; that Heston Blumenthal can charge £300 for a cucumber starter because it's gastronomical; that the dog whistle is the one that was used by that sick bastard down at Number 12 to control his daughters; and that a selection of words I've never seen before is a poem, because it's posted as a poem with the intent that it be read as a poem and it uses poetic devices, even though they're in an unusual pattern.

That's not a value judgment. It is not necessarily a good poem because it is new and interesting -- and it may be a terribly bad poem because the only reason it's presented that way is that the writer had no clue how to present a poem, therefore had no idea what other elements go into a poem other than the very basic and obvious element of structure.

But because it's presented in the context of being a poem, then as a critic we should read it as such, then make suggestions on how to make it a better poem, not how to alter its structure to make it what we've seen before.

So poetry doesn't exist unless it is presented as such.
That makes sense.
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so if i write a poem and don't present it, it's not a poem.
and if i write a poem and say it's an oak tree, is it a poem or an oak tree....what if i write a poem and someone else says it's an oak tree? stop confusing me shem Sad
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Wow, so many interesting concepts to reterritorialize. Their immigration
to the territory of my brain-body-organ met the friction of my ignorance;
overheating, delirium, and sharp jabs of pleasure ensued.
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you love it....the oak tree told me so
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Billy,

An Oak tree can only theoretically be like a poem, but if you write a poem and call it an oak tree, it is still not an oak tree because you have not written a poem to begin with.

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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(04-28-2014, 12:11 PM)Erthona Wrote:  Billy,

An Oak tree can only theoretically be like a poem, but if you write a poem and call it an oak tree, it is still not an oak tree because you have not written a poem to begin with.

Dale

You could cut down an actual oak tree, pulp it, make paper and then write a poem on the paper . . .
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(04-28-2014, 12:15 PM)milo Wrote:  
(04-28-2014, 12:11 PM)Erthona Wrote:  Billy,

An Oak tree can only theoretically be like a poem, but if you write a poem and call it an oak tree, it is still not an oak tree because you have not written a poem to begin with.

Dale

You could cut down an actual oak tree, pulp it, make paper and then write a poem on the paper . . .

That would yield an interesting typographical analysis.
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it would be a big fuckin piece of paper ConfusedUndecided
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(04-28-2014, 03:23 PM)billy Wrote:  it would be a big fuckin piece of paper ConfusedUndecided


Madmen theorise and wise men feel obliged to listen...wise men theorise and mad men wisely say it's a crock of shit. I know where I stand.
Best,
Quercus robus
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Quercus berberidifolia, a Greek tree hugger queried: If a poem were read in a scrub oak forest and no human or Ent listened, was it really poetry? Or, was it just prose with bad line breaks?
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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(04-28-2014, 04:56 PM)tectak Wrote:  
(04-28-2014, 03:23 PM)billy Wrote:  it would be a big fuckin piece of paper ConfusedUndecided


Madmen theorise and wise men feel obliged to listen...wise men theorise and mad men wisely say it's a crock of shit. I know where I stand.
Best,
Quercus robus

''robur'' ?
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Can hemp replace trees as a major source of art?

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(04-29-2014, 02:42 PM)rayheinrich Wrote:  
Can hemp replace trees as a major source of art?


I am sure it could be developed as a watercolor support medium. I have used a few bark papers before, but nothing is a good enough substitute for 100% cotton rag for my tastes.
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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