Fauxku Choo Choo (the play's the thing)
Do nuthin' but leave.
Unstick yourself,
you're don here.

Unstuck and floating off,
winter makes an early exit.
Climbing hydrangea leaves
bud outside an opened window.
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Unstuck and floating off,
winter makes an early exit.
Climbing hydrangea leaves
bud outside an opened window.

Excitement!, that open window,
murdered it again, and there's no love
to bring it back -- thoughts floating off.
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that open window,
murdered it again, and there's no love
to bring it back -- thoughts floating off.

opened sliders
let heat float out
a woodfire balance
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    opened sliders
    let heat float out
    a woodfire balance
   
    sun's heat
    balanced on icy water -
    early spring
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sun's heat
balanced on icy water -
early spring

sun's cooled
balanced on icy snowclouds -
late autumn
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sun's cooled
balanced on icy snowclouds -
late autumn

northern snowbirds
head south when flakes fly
don't be late
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    northern snowbirds
    head south when flakes fly
    don't be late
   
    matching summer clouds
    eyeing plump beetles -
    rainforest snowbirds

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matching summer clouds
eyeing plump beetles -
rainforest snowbirds

frost warning
follows perennial planting
resist annuals
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annual warning:
the Big One is coming
and we're not talking about this farpprrpffrrppfff
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frost warning
resist annuals
cover perennials

ducks behind
blackened marsh
choose sunlit paths
there's always a better reason to love
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ducks behind
blackened marsh
choose sunlit paths

(I screwed mine up, should have 2 words, if possible, from the poem above, sorry. River's followed the general rules.)

Duck
black clouds
follow hints of summer
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Duck
black clouds
follow hints of summer

Summer hints at being hot
so winter waits
till her clothes come off

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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    Summer hints at being hot
    so winter waits
    till her clothes come off


    one day she hints at summer
    next day you'll need your clothes -
    never trust spring


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one day she hints at summer
next day you'll need clothes -
never trust spring

Never trust a rusty spring
with all your weight
things go ping

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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    all the pathways
    handed down the line
    spring migration


    spring pathways leading nowhere -
    domain name servers feud
    over daylight savings time




The Fauxku Choo Choo guidelines are so far back in the string (and so muddled by my incessant cuteness),
that I thought I'd post an abridged copy here for energetic newbies and memory-impaired oldies.

Abridged Fauxku Choo Choo guidelines:
Abridged Fauxku Choo Choo guidelines:

1. Any TINY poem of 1 to 4 lines (or a 5 line limerick) - does not have to be haiku-like.
2. Poem includes 2 significant words from the preceding one.
        (Tense and plurality may be changed -- homonyms and adventurous word-play are encouraged .)
3. Poem reflects some aspect of the previous poem (encouraged but not obligatory).

also:
4. Copy last poem and repeat it above your poem in your post.
5. It's OK to play with yourself. (Post replies to you own poem.)
6. If the previous poem doesn't fit the guidelines:
        Either mention this politely, or continue on as if nothing happened,
        or use the poem before it, or strike off on your own. (See guideline 3 above.)
7. It's OK to add TINY extraneous (or not) notes.
 8. Ray can do whatever he wants as he is the One True God (of Fauxku Choo Choo).
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spring pathways leading nowhere -
domain name servers feud
over daylight savings time

saving daylight in a stanza;
poetry busy building
pathways over time
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    saving daylight in a stanza;
    poetry busy building
    pathways over time
   

    poetry -
    a pathway filled
    with forks
   
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poetry -
a pathway filled
with forks


the poet tree grows best
beside the right fork
filled with linguine,
watered by a pinot gris
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    the poet tree grows best
    beside the right fork
    filled with linguine,
    watered by a pinot gris
   

    Love and coffee, joy and alcohol;
    ham, disaster, donuts, and ennui.
    Scrambled words and eggs, its wherewithal;
    just stick it with a fork, it's poetry.
   


(I followed your clever example and equated "poet tree" and "poetry".)
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Love and coffee, joy and alcohol;
ham, disaster, donuts, and ennui.
Scrambled words and eggs, its wherewithal;
just stick it with a fork, it's poetry.

Just take a fork and give a little prick
then wait and watch the liquid fat flow forth
until it stops - then, with the egg flip, stick
it on the page, and call it verse, henceforth.

(a poem is a sausage, after all)
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