Hear Me - Codi Spence
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Hear me
I cant stand that your really not hearing me
You dont even understand which way you're steering me
You really dont know whats best for me
But now i understand how its going to be
You dont care what i say or how if affects me
To put it quite simply, your ears neglect me
Listen to my words, i honestly dont need this
I have enough support, but your trying to feed this
Im being closeminded and disrespectful ?
I made some mistakes and im not regretful
So i say, hear me, just listen to every single word
What you're doing is absolutely absurd
But i have not a choice but to follow your orders
I feel my feelings being attacked by mortars
So i say, hear me, soak in what im saying
You wont, but its okay i see the game your playing
You make the descisions in my future, my present and my life
I feel it in my back, a cold, sharp, power-hungry knife.
Its not the pain that defeats me
Its the betrayal that eats me
You were supposed to support me no matter what
Now i feel that same cold knife in my gut
My mind is made, there is no changing it
But its MY life, you're rearanging it.
I have no choice but to do it
But hear me, when i go through it,
The pain, the fear, the hate of my reflection
Just remember it was you, it was your neglection.





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(06-13-2013, 05:58 AM)TheLostAddict Wrote:   Hear me
I cant stand that your really not hearing me
You dont even understand which way you're steering me
You really dont know whats best for me
But now i understand how its going to be
You dont care what i say or how if affects me
To put it quite simply, your ears neglect me
Listen to my words, i honestly dont need this
I have enough support, but your trying to feed this
Im being closeminded and disrespectful ?
I made some mistakes and im not regretful
So i say, hear me, just listen to every single word
What you're doing is absolutely absurd
But i have not a choice but to follow your orders
I feel my feelings being attacked by mortars
So i say, hear me, soak in what im saying
You wont, but its okay i see the game your playing
You make the descisions in my future, my present and my life
I feel it in my back, a cold, sharp, power-hungry knife.
Its not the pain that defeats me
Its the betrayal that eats me
You were supposed to support me no matter what
Now i feel that same cold knife in my gut
My mind is made, there is no changing it
But its MY life, you're rearanging it.
I have no choice but to do it
But hear me, when i go through it,
The pain, the fear, the hate of my reflection
Just remember it was you, it was your neglection.


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