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[tectak]

The line between the legs which yearns burns and begs,
searching for a soul to devour with unshakeable power. searches not searching or you have no sentence

The want beyond mere wife yields pain strain and strife, a want beyond wife is awkward. You relate an abstract term (want) with a solid and definitive noun (wife) and this cannot work . The want beyond a wife's desire yields pain and strife.
twisting my thought shivering hurried and hot. twisting my thoughts; shivering, hurried and hot

The shallow within our selves which extolls cajoles and contains, This, I am afraid is gobbledygook. It sounds fine but means nothing. You are using words in ways that they are not meant to be used. To begin, ourselves is one word.What is this adjective, shallow, when used as a noun? What can you mean? How does a shallow extoll? Do you know what extoll means? Yes, of course you do...but so do your readers and this come as across as an incompetance. Worse, you then say that the shallow cajoles. Utterly nonsensical and you cannot explain the use of the word without invoking similarly nonsensical argument. So please do not try. Instead, think what you mean and use words that give confidence and precision to both you, but more importantly, to your readers
ending empathy discovered in apathy. Huh?

Hello and welcome,
This is not a new poem but you challenge yourself to make it so and that is praiseworthy. The most problematical area would normally be in the execution of a new view or take on the theme, but here it is not. The overwhelming problem is the lack of grammatical clarity and debateable word use. These you must prioritise.
Best,
tectak