06-11-2012, 04:48 AM
( if anyone can guess where this is set.)
That would be Melbourne, most populace state in Australia, in the state of Victoria, known for it's beer, such as "Victoria Bitters", which until recently was the largest selling beer on the island. Also, all the other items you mentioned can be found in that area.
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This sentence seems to need some work.
"Shrieking with laughter to flies of to a nearby Banksia?"
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The lines in general seem a bit choppy, and could probably benefit from some smoothing.
Dale
That would be Melbourne, most populace state in Australia, in the state of Victoria, known for it's beer, such as "Victoria Bitters", which until recently was the largest selling beer on the island. Also, all the other items you mentioned can be found in that area.
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This sentence seems to need some work.
"Shrieking with laughter to flies of to a nearby Banksia?"
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The lines in general seem a bit choppy, and could probably benefit from some smoothing.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.