02-19-2012, 10:23 AM
I like the long lines, but am metrically-challenged. I di not think the last lines worthy of what had gone before, but perhaps a re-read would cure that.
RE 'soft'. we still speak of 'the going being soft', tho' I do not know whether the expression extends beyond these Isles: I think it would be readily understood in the Gulf states!
RE 'soft'. we still speak of 'the going being soft', tho' I do not know whether the expression extends beyond these Isles: I think it would be readily understood in the Gulf states!

