Culloden Still.......
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I like the long lines, but am metrically-challenged. I di not think the last lines worthy of what had gone before, but perhaps a re-read would cure that.

RE 'soft'. we still speak of 'the going being soft', tho' I do not know whether the expression extends beyond these Isles: I think it would be readily understood in the Gulf states!
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Culloden Still....... - by tectak - 02-19-2012, 03:28 AM
RE: Culloden Still....... - by abu nuwas - 02-19-2012, 10:23 AM
RE: Culloden Still....... - by tectak - 02-19-2012, 07:56 PM
RE: Culloden Still....... - by Philatone - 02-20-2012, 05:31 AM
RE: Culloden Still....... - by tectak - 02-20-2012, 07:10 AM
RE: Culloden Still....... - by Philatone - 02-20-2012, 09:22 AM
RE: Culloden Still....... - by Erthona - 02-21-2012, 10:40 AM



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