09-22-2011, 06:49 AM
I assumed this was the outcome of yet another row (A long division seeming to say you'd been at odds for some time) and I was with you until I got to the 'mud-fight' line where I lost it. If this is a fight between lovers how come the last line is 'winners' - plural. As I said I don't understand the poem....but perhaps I've missed the point.
Shouldn't 'gives' be 'gave' to match 'slammed/shattered' past tense words?
Shouldn't 'gives' be 'gave' to match 'slammed/shattered' past tense words?

