09-22-2011, 06:34 AM
Thank you very much everyone for the read, the comments and suggestions. I have made some edits as per- not sure how it is laid out workshopping here. I don't know what I was thinking with the 'still, dull' line- one of those where you know it is wrong but can't think how to right it, so thanks to Aish, Leanne and Todd for showing me how to fix it and make both lines work. I removed the offending 'prevaricating', hoping that the whole suggests it anyway. Cheers Abu.