Village child

Village child

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09-22-2011, 03:26 AM

I very much liked the first two lines, with their quiet, nostalgic tone. It brought back those days vividly. The last stanza is that much darker, and sadder, stronger in a sense, but I just wanted to hang on to the softer stuff. I wondered about 'prevaricating', but not much.

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Village child - by Ca ne fait rien - 09-22-2011, 01:10 AM

RE: Village child - by Aish - 09-22-2011, 03:09 AM

RE: Village child - by abu nuwas - 09-22-2011, 03:26 AM

RE: Village child - by Leanne - 09-22-2011, 05:30 AM

RE: Village child - by Todd - 09-22-2011, 05:41 AM

RE: Village child - by Ca ne fait rien - 09-22-2011, 06:34 AM

RE: Village child - by billy - 09-22-2011, 12:21 PM

RE: Village child - by addy - 09-22-2011, 04:19 PM

RE: Village child - by Ca ne fait rien - 09-22-2011, 05:08 PM

RE: Village child - by only rob - 09-23-2011, 10:25 PM

RE: Village child - by writeitout - 09-23-2011, 10:45 PM

RE: Village child - by Ca ne fait rien - 09-24-2011, 12:43 AM

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