i really like it specially
The moon a fat comedian
pausing for breath against his stool.
i have one nit
A man who craves the long dark night
when all we know and all we see
is drained of joy, blasphemy
replacing it.
it goes from he to we, other than that for me it's a great little poem
the last verse feels almost perfect
thanks for the read
The moon a fat comedian
pausing for breath against his stool.
i have one nit
A man who craves the long dark night
when all we know and all we see
is drained of joy, blasphemy
replacing it.
it goes from he to we, other than that for me it's a great little poem
the last verse feels almost perfect
thanks for the read