Despair
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Well, thanks, I am encouraged by that. My opinion based on my singular attempt at Triolets, is that anyone writing these must begin with a simile that will work well when repeated in the various lines without making the entire scheme seem forced.This is not as easy to accomplish as I initially thought. However, that seems to be where so many poets falter in writing these and other fixed forms. I was impressed by how easy you and Leanne seem to make it appear even though, as I have implied, I know better. I may find others but I only found these forums today. It looks like I have some enjoyable reading ahead of me though.

Sid

(07-20-2011, 08:08 AM)Heslopian Wrote:  Thanks very much for your kind words SidSmile I did have a great deal of trouble crafting this one at first, and went through several revisions.
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Messages In This Thread
Despair - by heslopian - 07-19-2011, 08:50 AM
RE: Despair - by Leanne - 07-19-2011, 09:04 AM
RE: Despair - by heslopian - 07-19-2011, 09:17 AM
RE: Despair - by Leanne - 07-19-2011, 09:20 AM
RE: Despair - by heslopian - 07-19-2011, 09:21 AM
RE: Despair - by billy - 07-19-2011, 10:02 AM
RE: Despair - by heslopian - 07-19-2011, 10:18 AM
RE: Despair - by ICSoria - 07-20-2011, 08:06 AM
RE: Despair - by heslopian - 07-20-2011, 08:08 AM
RE: Despair - by ICSoria - 07-20-2011, 02:00 PM
RE: Despair - by Leanne - 07-20-2011, 05:26 PM



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