07-12-2011, 11:03 AM
wow jack. i really like it the way you merge one author into another is excellent.
should there be a comma after brontes. i quiet happy the poems here because i'd struggle to give it
constructive feedback as such.
some may think the content trite, (everyone and their dad have written of poets, or authors, or artists etc) but here you do it well and without cliché
Charles Dickens and his broad grotesques
pouting like pantomime dames, was my fave lines as they depict a lot of what his characters were about.
thanks for the read.
should there be a comma after brontes. i quiet happy the poems here because i'd struggle to give it
constructive feedback as such.
some may think the content trite, (everyone and their dad have written of poets, or authors, or artists etc) but here you do it well and without cliché
Charles Dickens and his broad grotesques
pouting like pantomime dames, was my fave lines as they depict a lot of what his characters were about.
thanks for the read.