Don't Speak to Me in Tongues

[Leanne]

Wunderbar! Now you pick up a half-rhyme from meme to requiem (and back to syndrome I suppose) -- I'll bet this sounds excellent read aloud. Content-wise, I can't find any fault as its message is pretty clear and well drawn. One line that does continue to give me pause is "black and white and grey"... I can understand the grey, but for myself, I'd shy away from the black and white given those are the colours of academia. Perhaps something in "shades of grey"? But now I'm imposing personal preference, so feel free to ignore as it's really not a fault in the line, just in my own reading.