Emotions of the Many

[billy]

i see you did two poems

i'll take this one as the first and say thanks for posting on the forum.

the poem. two lines stick out;

I feel as tall as a summer day
The ones that wash the rain away.

to use summer day as tall is clever. (long day)
and extra clever when used to wash away water. they are my favourite lines.
a couple of slant rhymes in there but they work okay.

it flows well when read, although i think line 2 need a little change to make it work better.

thanks for the poem Tigress