The Great Jimmy Hoffa Scavenger Hunt

[billy]

getting rid of the first line works for me.

my nit is the last stanza. it feels i've heard it before, at the end of some overly dramatic horror show on tv.
for me it isn't needed, the poem is better without it.

other than that i found it to be an interesting read that flows well. some of the images are perfect and i love the second to last verse.
for me it's one of the best poems i've seen from you.

thanks for the read.