skin

[Tiger the Lion]

skin

We're all spirit
wrapped up in skin
but it confuses me
every now and then.

Hey Dale. Good to see you. I read it like those little crises of faith moments that kill us by a thousand cuts. "Skin" and "then" half rhyme nicely. Only suggestion would be to go back and see if you can cut anything...

We are all spirit      - is "all" needed?
wrapped up in skin   - judgement call on "up" 
but it confuses me    - "but" is not needed unless you'd opened with " I know we are all spirit...,"
every now and then.  - sounds more blunt without "every" but maybe more pensive with. Your poem.

You could make all of those cuts or none. Just my observations. 
Paul