A Sworn Statement (new title: Fool's Gold)

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Hi TqB
Like the new title, and the second stanza, but I can't see what S1 is bringing to the piece. Do you really need it? S2 seems complete without it.

Homunculi gives me pause. Similarly crowded.
Just looked up homunculi and I sit corrected. Objection withdrawn, but ... crowded remains. (Also, could you not find more medieval terms for
of memory, movement, and recognition ?
They seem a little too contemporary.)


Best, Knot
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