True Story
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(02-28-2024, 02:11 PM)brmccb Wrote:  A stickler minimalist would tell you that using the word "ever" could be unnecessary.

I'm a stickler for form, so I love that you wrote a complete statement that follows the syllabic format.
Thanks for the read and observations. This isn't really a poem so much as a commentary in 17 syllables.  Haha. We had a thunderstorm here in Ontario yesterday. I really can't remember one in February. That El Nino is a mischievous boy.
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True Story - by Tiger the Lion - 02-28-2024, 12:13 PM
RE: True Story - by brmccb - 02-28-2024, 02:11 PM
RE: True Story - by Tiger the Lion - 02-29-2024, 05:39 AM
RE: True Story - by Wjames - 03-02-2024, 07:37 AM



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