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True Story - Tiger the Lion - 02-28-2024
we don't remember
ever witnessing lightning
in February
RE: True Story - brmccb - 02-28-2024
A stickler minimalist would tell you that using the word "ever" could be unnecessary.
I'm a stickler for form, so I love that you wrote a complete statement that follows the syllabic format.
RE: True Story - Tiger the Lion - 02-29-2024
(02-28-2024, 02:11 PM)brmccb Wrote: A stickler minimalist would tell you that using the word "ever" could be unnecessary.Thanks for the read and observations. This isn't really a poem so much as a commentary in 17 syllables. Haha. We had a thunderstorm here in Ontario yesterday. I really can't remember one in February. That El Nino is a mischievous boy.
I'm a stickler for form, so I love that you wrote a complete statement that follows the syllabic format.
RE: True Story - Wjames - 03-02-2024
(02-29-2024, 05:39 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: Thanks for the read and observations. This isn't really a poem so much as a commentary in 17 syllables. Haha. We had a thunderstorm here in Ontario yesterday. I really can't remember one in February. That El Nino is a mischievous boy.Winter is cancelled this year, there's been El Nino in my life before, but never like this. It's March and I haven't put on my boots once.