Cold Refrigerator (a Todd piece) revision

[busker]

When the lights turn back on and electricity
courses through these walls and veins …. “electricity courses” is cliche 
and warms our hearts from the devastating … veins retuning blood to the heart….nice parallel 
days, nights we stared at the memories
blank and irritated from all the food spoiled. …. The line starts with “when”. The sentence is incomplete
No telling when the lights will come on.

Yesterday was our anniversary with no where
to refresh the pages of pictures and sequences
of events that shut down the world.

'go ahead'
I said

The joke being you never would, you did. …. Abrupt. Not enough of a backstory. A bit too much of a sob story at this point. With some more background, maybe the reader would be sufficiently invested in the narrator and the wife.
Now the fridge is cold and empty
but the lights will never come back on. …. Or the other way around - the lights will come back on but the fridge will remain cold and empty?

Is this a Todd piece or a piece written in Todd’s style?