02-10-2019, 02:20 PM
Hey Alexorande,
I liked this poem very much, very well done indeed. Having said that and having taken the time to read your other poems this one feels like you where flexing you poetic muscles a bit. That is to say your other works feel much more genuine. Again a beautiful poem, please accept this critique as a compliment to your overall body of work as that is how I intend it to be.
I liked this poem very much, very well done indeed. Having said that and having taken the time to read your other poems this one feels like you where flexing you poetic muscles a bit. That is to say your other works feel much more genuine. Again a beautiful poem, please accept this critique as a compliment to your overall body of work as that is how I intend it to be.
Someday the Mystery will be known 