Intuition
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Thank you Lydish and nibbed. I'll get to work on the grammatical errors tomorrow. After reading your critiques, I think I'll try to rework the longer lines.
I've always wanted to live in a world where it's okay to pronounce both L's in my name.
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Intuition - by fuzzyllama1 - 08-02-2017, 01:31 PM
RE: Intuition - by Lydish - 08-04-2017, 05:23 AM
RE: Intuition - by fuzzyllama1 - 08-04-2017, 08:28 AM
RE: Intuition - by nibbed - 08-04-2017, 06:57 AM
RE: Intuition - by Lizzie - 08-11-2017, 06:38 AM
RE: Intuition - by fuzzyllama1 - 08-15-2017, 07:27 AM
RE: Intuition - by alonso ramoran - 08-13-2017, 11:17 AM
RE: Intuition - by lyon - 08-14-2017, 01:31 AM



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