07-02-2017, 08:15 PM
Hi!
I loved the rhymes!
My favourite part of the poem was:
"Though the ramparts of Solitude seemed to protect you,
So does a dragon guarded tower two,
But no one should live in the bastions of Lonley-nest,
For all souls find that the quest for rest, at home be best,"
I really like how you were able to portray loneliness, an emotion, as Lonely-nest, a place where you can hide.
I loved the rhymes!
My favourite part of the poem was:
"Though the ramparts of Solitude seemed to protect you,
So does a dragon guarded tower two,
But no one should live in the bastions of Lonley-nest,
For all souls find that the quest for rest, at home be best,"
I really like how you were able to portray loneliness, an emotion, as Lonely-nest, a place where you can hide.