06-04-2017, 06:32 AM
(05-30-2017, 03:55 AM)CRNDLSM Wrote: I know your type - On the attack -Love the format!!!!!!!!! should I read it left to right?
so full of hype, your work is a hack. hmm.. maybe "the work of a hack"?
you groan and gripe Cut you some slack?
that fruits aren't ripe. Lay off the crack!
Think you're a wizard? Drunk on a flagon,
Here take a lizard, you got me gaggin'
cut out the gizzard, on all of your braggin'.
conjure a blizzard. Summon a dragon!
Suddenly freezing? Suddenly bleeding?
Can't stop sneezing, It's just what you're needing.
coughing, and wheezing? Temperature's heating,
Hands on neck, squeezing? the creature is feeding!
'Cause I'm the monster! 'Cause you're the ghost
A friendly imposter deserving to roast.
pretending to sponsor It's my turn to boast:
your feelings, fostered. <<"foster"? The host with the most! < possibly something other than "host"? "most" works well with boast in a bragging way
but too cliche as it is right now?
But you're full of crap, I'm leading the flock!
deserving a slap. I'm breaking the lock!
You step in my trap; Oh, what a shock...
I tighten the strap. There's plenty in stock.
Here's the berry. Here's the berry.
It's very scary. It's very scary <<< not sure of significance of the berry but then again, somehow it does not matter to me.
Great creativity with the 2 columns! should I read it up and down?
I envision perhaps 2 people singing both sides simultaneously
Please check the disable similes option.