The light

[spiritthebrave]

i think this poem makes heavy use of cliche- fire, that mythical light at the end of the tunnel, monsters- and would be much better if more unique insight or detail was added. everyone at some point in their lives is fearful, and everyone faces their monsters. what makes yours different? what about this light do i not know?

best of luck if you intend to edit hope this helps, if only slightly.

What I was trying to get across was more of an "ignorance is bliss" theme, in a more imaginable way. The light that seems to make everything clearer (knowledge) is the very thing that illuminates all that is wrong. Do you see that at all? This is actually my 1st post, so all feedback is more then welcome!